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Post by Child of Immanuel on Apr 24, 2006 10:47:18 GMT -5
Copied from a comment by dantheman on the old site:
DanTheMan said... Verse 7 reads a little difficult, but I get it better on the 2nd and 3rd reads.
Verse 8 seem to miss a "than" before ", to enter".
Keep up the good work, CoI!
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Post by Child of Immanuel on Apr 24, 2006 10:47:45 GMT -5
My reply, copied from the old site:
Child of Immanuel said... 7 was a very difficult verse to translate. What do you think would be a better rendering (based on whatever Bible you read?)
I didn't think the second 'than' was necessary in 8, but I have eclectic tastes in grammar. :-)
Thanks for making me think!
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